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Otra historia basura del momento lo digo por lo del comienzo y los capítulos y la actualización la historia es rara le das poder a alguien y se lo nerfeas porque si... eso no se le puede llamar op sólo se le puede llamar estupides para la trama bueno otra historia con un buen comienzo arruinada porque a los autores se les ocurrió agregar lo del harem y nerfear a sus protagonistas salu2
thanks for the chapter....didn't expect that samsara would be there....at first the story are going smoothly until you make the mc change loki... the story becoming more mess up when you change the villain from avenger 1 ...and then you make the oc villain destroy the new york city.... but who would thought that Jesus was here to save the day.....but I still think that this story is already mess up but if you want to continue this book maybe you can make the mc collect all the infinity stone and change everything from the moment he was declare as a God.
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Dude, you are doing a great job in making this fanfic... Compare to most other people you are talented... Sure your story can use a bit of a brush up with more detailed and lore but it seem you are a casual fan of marvel like most other people but it enough and can be fix by researching more... All in all, what I am trying to say is you did great so I am waiting for more of your future works [img=recommend]
This was one of the most creative fan fiction I have ever read!!!, from the way the mc ingeniously uses his knowledge of marvel to prepare for future events by enjoying his second childhood in asgard before it gets destroyed, to using his OP NEAR instant mastery and SUPER INTELLIGENGE to master basic self defence moves in the record time of 2 years. Chaos (the person who sent him to this world) made the right decision to really mess up the marvel world after all what says non cannon better than smashing learning speed records by chopping super hard wood with op abilities???!! I apologise if my review was longer than the chapters in this n0v3l, I dont want to waste your reading time so I will finish writing soon. I further apologive for any typos. sincerely a fan of all things g00d [img=recommend]
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It was quite nice. Obviously, it's not going to be professionally made so for a story on a site where anyone can upload it was pretty good.
Фанфик очень интересный, много ему не хватает но есть многое чего не хватает в других фанфиках. .............................................. ...............................
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what the **** is this. alot of misspelled words and short chapters are we looking at a trash fan fiction or what. it doesn't make any sense at all
One of those that you want to read the whole thing without stopping Liked how the story developed and just over put everything together considering Marvel Universe is really big
It's a nice story and very enticing...though, the MC's a bit dumb...or maybe a lot dumber than he should be. I do look forward to seeing this story completed.
Thanks for the novel. I really love the settings of this world n the story development. All is decent going on smoothly except for the chapters length but there the beauty which makes me hungrier for more chapters! Hope I’ll be reading more from u author!
I'm just at the beginning but it's cool to read Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it.😎 It's cool to read it's cool to read.😁 Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it😎 Some little mistake here and there but it's cool to read.🤔 Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it. 😎 I know it's weird but it's cool nonetheless.
i really like this please keep it up. ......................................................................................................................................................
Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!
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Very nice that you’re back and that’s didbebdidbcjfndjjcjdjdbdbdjcbcndjcicb great because I’m gonna morning with the kids I gotta know how much is the food I gotta is now I cannot is a time to go eat now and I can go to eat and then. Made with the suggestion bar for exp.
Thank you uuuùuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Add to library! Finished reading it like a zoom!! It a good take on being a fanfic about MCU. The mc tries to not to intervene with the timeline and most of the time just being a bystander on the side. Though i hope dear author that you will still continue to write this novel despite some rotten potato ruining it for those who find joy reading your work (me included)
sadly no harem so i shall not read but if you ever make a harem dc or marvel fan fic ill be sure to read..................................................................
Овооврв ллвоовор топааро лоаапол равкнго тоаыси счакоо ббщваи ььрапр ьлввргн де дплагп дмлвоар ьанвгп дпганв ьпланв лаовгу ьашаов бмлала ьсоагсдр дрдпшвры.
Окгурв дсдлоа двдлооа лслорс лсллиив лвлтвииа льаллвшу дыщопуьдчра ббчрраддс бчдщвгцц бжщчщущнезк ддлспсьвдкщеиьщв бдсщкзщцуашок бьвоичьщв ььчлрулдщч ьдлаагоудьв бдарррсддвов бвддвбббччи ьвлчллчррв лыллчббалв двлрв л.
excelent...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Оэсовдрвднвщнв овнвнс лмгагпдпш лпшадрвдрсоагсл лал лмгкомшм ьмгпл лвмдрсь шашмлпшадрс дащр лэсщнв ладрчжов лащрчжосжрвьсгвзла лашеыдрч.щжгкше лащрвщнв ьсщнвзга лпхгахга эоазгвзг эосзочзнв осзназнв.
Мепор ппро ирраас ораа рона п пплонан плорпро ммппорп сроррптте рпьвоп аьптоаи ьаптооа татвтро Врррыр уьатььлш чрелша лнквтд мтпчыврьи итраапркп ьтппрти амтьисмт.
its not bad....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Пойдет история , почетать можноиногда на любителя. Дмлплаосо,р,оммлмтслслс лмлслм бмлпь алаладрвдрчжовжнвзнвзнвщнвжовщнузосэосжгущнв деыщнвжосжов.
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MC no good. Language no good. Chapters no good, too short chaps. Grammar = worst. Background is OK i guess. What's good you ask? I honestly dunno.
Guy gets reborn as a God and asgard and trains for decades under the god of war tyr and and Tyr says”hey promise me that you will protect asgard” and this guy does nothing…. Says a lot about his lAckk of character and how selfish he is. Also why does he care about going to earth for canon so badly? These ppl act like living fir hundreds of years as all together diifferent species and still acts like a 15 yo human its ridiculous
Otra historia basura del momento lo digo por lo del comienzo y los capítulos y la actualización la historia es rara le das poder a alguien y se lo nerfeas porque si... eso no se le puede llamar op sólo se le puede llamar estupides para la trama bueno otra historia con un buen comienzo arruinada porque a los autores se les ocurrió agregar lo del harem y nerfear a sus protagonistas salu2
thanks for the chapter....didn't expect that samsara would be there....at first the story are going smoothly until you make the mc change loki... the story becoming more mess up when you change the villain from avenger 1 ...and then you make the oc villain destroy the new york city.... but who would thought that Jesus was here to save the day.....but I still think that this story is already mess up but if you want to continue this book maybe you can make the mc collect all the infinity stone and change everything from the moment he was declare as a God.
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Dude, you are doing a great job in making this fanfic... Compare to most other people you are talented... Sure your story can use a bit of a brush up with more detailed and lore but it seem you are a casual fan of marvel like most other people but it enough and can be fix by researching more... All in all, what I am trying to say is you did great so I am waiting for more of your future works [img=recommend]
This was one of the most creative fan fiction I have ever read!!!, from the way the mc ingeniously uses his knowledge of marvel to prepare for future events by enjoying his second childhood in asgard before it gets destroyed, to using his OP NEAR instant mastery and SUPER INTELLIGENGE to master basic self defence moves in the record time of 2 years. Chaos (the person who sent him to this world) made the right decision to really mess up the marvel world after all what says non cannon better than smashing learning speed records by chopping super hard wood with op abilities???!! I apologise if my review was longer than the chapters in this n0v3l, I dont want to waste your reading time so I will finish writing soon. I further apologive for any typos. sincerely a fan of all things g00d [img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler It was quite nice. Obviously, it's not going to be professionally made so for a story on a site where anyone can upload it was pretty good.
Фанфик очень интересный, много ему не хватает но есть многое чего не хватает в других фанфиках. .............................................. ...............................
...................................................................................................................................mm.m.....
what the **** is this. alot of misspelled words and short chapters are we looking at a trash fan fiction or what. it doesn't make any sense at all
One of those that you want to read the whole thing without stopping Liked how the story developed and just over put everything together considering Marvel Universe is really big
It's a nice story and very enticing...though, the MC's a bit dumb...or maybe a lot dumber than he should be. I do look forward to seeing this story completed.
Thanks for the novel. I really love the settings of this world n the story development. All is decent going on smoothly except for the chapters length but there the beauty which makes me hungrier for more chapters! Hope I’ll be reading more from u author!
I'm just at the beginning but it's cool to read Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it.😎 It's cool to read it's cool to read.😁 Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it😎 Some little mistake here and there but it's cool to read.🤔 Sooooo... Read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it. 😎 I know it's weird but it's cool nonetheless.
i really like this please keep it up. ......................................................................................................................................................
Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!Good story!!!!!!!
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Very nice that you’re back and that’s didbebdidbcjfndjjcjdjdbdbdjcbcndjcicb great because I’m gonna morning with the kids I gotta know how much is the food I gotta is now I cannot is a time to go eat now and I can go to eat and then. Made with the suggestion bar for exp.
Thank you uuuùuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Add to library! Finished reading it like a zoom!! It a good take on being a fanfic about MCU. The mc tries to not to intervene with the timeline and most of the time just being a bystander on the side. Though i hope dear author that you will still continue to write this novel despite some rotten potato ruining it for those who find joy reading your work (me included)
sadly no harem so i shall not read but if you ever make a harem dc or marvel fan fic ill be sure to read..................................................................
Овооврв ллвоовор топааро лоаапол равкнго тоаыси счакоо ббщваи ььрапр ьлввргн де дплагп дмлвоар ьанвгп дпганв ьпланв лаовгу ьашаов бмлала ьсоагсдр дрдпшвры.
Окгурв дсдлоа двдлооа лслорс лсллиив лвлтвииа льаллвшу дыщопуьдчра ббчрраддс бчдщвгцц бжщчщущнезк ддлспсьвдкщеиьщв бдсщкзщцуашок бьвоичьщв ььчлрулдщч ьдлаагоудьв бдарррсддвов бвддвбббччи ьвлчллчррв лыллчббалв двлрв л.
excelent...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Оэсовдрвднвщнв овнвнс лмгагпдпш лпшадрвдрсоагсл лал лмгкомшм ьмгпл лвмдрсь шашмлпшадрс дащр лэсщнв ладрчжов лащрчжосжрвьсгвзла лашеыдрч.щжгкше лащрвщнв ьсщнвзга лпхгахга эоазгвзг эосзочзнв осзназнв.
Мепор ппро ирраас ораа рона п пплонан плорпро ммппорп сроррптте рпьвоп аьптоаи ьаптооа татвтро Врррыр уьатььлш чрелша лнквтд мтпчыврьи итраапркп ьтппрти амтьисмт.
its not bad....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Пойдет история , почетать можноиногда на любителя. Дмлплаосо,р,оммлмтслслс лмлслм бмлпь алаладрвдрчжовжнвзнвзнвщнвжовщнузосэосжгущнв деыщнвжосжов.
Reveal Spoiler MC no good. Language no good. Chapters no good, too short chaps. Grammar = worst. Background is OK i guess. What's good you ask? I honestly dunno.
Guy gets reborn as a God and asgard and trains for decades under the god of war tyr and and Tyr says”hey promise me that you will protect asgard” and this guy does nothing…. Says a lot about his lAckk of character and how selfish he is. Also why does he care about going to earth for canon so badly? These ppl act like living fir hundreds of years as all together diifferent species and still acts like a 15 yo human its ridiculous